The first graph shows population growth. In India and China, the population is increasing by approximately 250 million every three years. The population of India will increase continuely on a continuing basis, but the population of China is predicted to decrease after 2035. So, the population of India will surpass it of China's in by 2030. The population of the U.S., by contrast will incresse increase slowly.
In the second graph, the urbanisation of China is increasing shaply. So, in by 2015, the urban population will be more than the rural population in that country. In India, urban and rural population is increasing at roughly the same time rate. Maybe in after 2040, the urban population will be more higher than the rural population in that country, according to the trends shown in the graph.
In short, the population of both countries will increase continuously, especially and the urban population in particular will increase more than the rural one will.
Good effort, Yongil.
Looking at the corrections, you can see that you need to be careful of:
- Using CAPITAL letters for countries and nations (China, India, etc.)
- Using the word "by" to show the time when something will have happened or be happening
- Capital letters to start sentences (So, ...)
- Not using capital letters in the middle of sentences (but the population of China) if the word is not a country or other special name
I hope those small tips help you. I think you did a pretty good job of explaining what the graphs show, and that is the most important thing for this task! Well done.
~ Jason