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In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer.

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In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer.

It is everybody’s wish to live as a successful person. It is most important for a person to be intelligent to spend a successful life. If a person is smart then he will solve his problems in life. He will be honest to other people. He will be a respectful person in society.

Firstly, an intelligent person have the ability to handle difficult situations in life because he will have the ability of quick and wise thinking. He knows that if he works hard then he will be successful in life. For example, if an intelligent person do a bakery business and observe obesity and diet conscious people in that community then instead of closing the business, he will start to make low fat and sugar free products immediately. In this way he will gain more profit as compare to his competitors. He will not be discouraged with the situation and work hard to stabilize his business. A genius person can tackle difficult situations in life.

Secondly, a brilliant individual will be a honest person. He will not hide anything from other people living with him. For example, if somebody is a cashier then he will not try to steal money because he will believe on his own abilities and hard work. He will know that it is impossible to hide a lie. A smart man do not tell a lie and dishonest with other people.

Thirdly, a genius person will be a respectful person in a society. Due to his quick and wise thinking, he will gain a respectful status in the community. For example, If somebody has some business problem then he will come and ask an intelligent person to give options to solve his problem. When he knows that he gave him wise and sincere advise, he will start to respect him. Another example is that scientists gain respect in this world due to their intelligent thinking . An Intelligent individuals are respectful people in a society.

In conclusion, to be successful in life, a person should have the quality of intelligence. A person with strong brainpower will solve the difficult situations in life. He will not spend a dishonest life. He will have a respectful name in the world.

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Hi sadcat,

I read your essay. Hier are some useful hints you can use to improve your essay. The introduction of an essay is very important, because it sets the tone. But, in this particular essay,yours is not very strong. Beside, you are using too many short sentences, such as..." If a person is smart then he will solve his problems in life. He will be honest to other people. He will be a respectful...". Instead, you should use compound sentences by replacing the periods with commas. In addition, you shifted a bit from the topic, because one paragraph is about..." respectful", but the subject is..." characteristics to be successful"...

All in all, your essay is well organized but it lack coherence in some parts. The first argument is good, but you need to work on the second and third one. Again,avoid using short sentences in your introduction and conclusion, because it breaks the flow of the reading. Watch out for the language use and grammar.
I am not going to rate the essay, I will leave the privilege to Jason to grade your essay.
I wish you good luck on your test. We are going to make it!

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There are many virtues and good characteristics that help and assist in making and building  a successful life and career.Honesty,respectfulness,and hard working are all good characteristics that would achieve a very competent and recognition positions.That all virtues would definitely bring a successful way of life that is presented on different aspects of life.The most important characteristic in my opinion is honesty that would guranatee everyone the respectfulness that is reflected on hard working and good judgement.

Firstly, honesty is a very hard quality that would be hard to aquire nowadays.I remember that when we were children and my grandfather consistent advice about that specific virtue.The many times we were gathered around him telling us stories of how honesty would bring mutual respect and self integrity.He used to tell us that without honesty it would be so difficult to be respected in work or in your family life.That day he told us about an incident that took place long time ago.My grandfather was the manager at a store and he was responsible of checking the money everynight before he leaves.On that day he forgot to lock the safe and he went in a hurry to attend a family emergency.One of his employes found the safe with the money inside, and he waited for my grandfather to come back and check the money, when my grandfather didnot show up he just sat there for the whole night and slept on that office.The next morning when my grandfather came and found his employe was sleeping on his office he got the employe a raise for his honesty, and all the workers respected him for his faithful and courageaous behavior.

Secondly, honesty if being practiced in a very sincere and genuine way would bring someone a peace of mind.I remember when my brother who was about to get marry and he came to a reality that he should do something about his life.He was so honest when he told his future wife that his financial situation is getting bad and that all the money he has now belongs to the bank.That day he was relieved of the stress he was having. and all got to respect his courage and telling the truth ,whatever it might take him.That day he felt that his honesty saved his life for his wife agreed and insisted on getting married and she respected his honesty and they lived happily together.

On conclusion,honesty is a valuable and truely geniuine virtue that should be aquired by all of us.It would definitely bring us the good reputation and respect and happiness as well.

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