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TOEIC Writing Test Practice 6: Respond to a written request

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jasonrenshaw star

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Directions:

In this part of the test, you will show how well you can write a response to an e-mail.

Your response will be scored on:

- the quality and variety of your sentences,
- vocabulary, and
- organization.

[You will have 10 minutes to read and answer each e-mail]

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Directions: Read the email.
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From:   admin@bizsuccess.com
To:   BizSuccess Online Members
Subject:   Special offer to members
Sent:   October 11, 8:09 A.M.

Dear valued member,

BizSuccess Publishing is proud to introduce a new dynamic online service to all of our online members: iPromote. This is a special training course that is fully accessible on the Internet, featuring interactive lectures from some of America's best-known business entrepreneurs. Find out how to promote your new ideas in the global marketplace and turn them into actual revenue earners for you!

Respond to this email to find out more about iPromote, and feel free to include any specific questions you may have.

Sincerely,

Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager

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Directions: Respond to the email. Ask TWO questions and make ONE request.
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28th September 2008 13:37 p.m.

minjungbaek

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Hello, I have a good question to you.

As writing this question, what if I wrote this way(under), is it possible way and formal style of a letter? And could I get more score on it in terms with exams?

From:   Bizsuccess Online Members
To:   admin@bizsuccess.com
Subject:   Special offer to members
Sent:   October 6, 8:09 A.M.

Dear valued member,

~~~sentences~~~

sincerly,

Minjung

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Best wishes, Minjung

06th October 2008 04:38 a.m.

jasonrenshaw star

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Hi Minjung,

This is good, but the "From" section should be from an actual person (either you or somebody you create and roleplay), not "Bizsuccess Online Members".

Also, you would need to address the response to Andrew Maskin (Dear Andrew or Dear Mr. Maskin), not "Dear valued member".

Remember you are responding as an online member to Andrew's mail to you, so you need to personalize it appropriately.

Also remember "Sincerely" (check your spelling and also use a capital S at the start of the word).

Hope that helps,

~ Jason

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06th October 2008 23:11 p.m.

byungkeunson

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From: byungkeun@yahoon.co.kr
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About the offers from you.
Sent: October 12, 9:09 A.M.

Dear Andrew,

Thank you very much for letting me know about the new service.

It sounds very good to me and I am interested in your new service. However, I just have a couple of questions before I'm joining it. First, How much is it to join this program? and Is there any discount option for current members?

In addition, just to make sure the quality of proram. Could you give me more detail information about the instuctors of this program?

Once again, thank you so much for giving me the informaiton. I'm looking foward to getting your response.

sincerely,

Byungkeun Son

08th October 2008 02:27 a.m.

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From: byungkeun@yahoon.co.kr
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About the offers from you.
Sent: October 12, 9:09 A.M.
Dear Andrew,
Thank you very much for letting me know about the new service.
It sounds very good to me and I am interested in your new service. However, I just have a couple of questions before I join it. First, how much is it to join this program? And, is there any discount option for current members?
In addition, I'd just like to confirm the quality of program. Could you give me more detailed information about the instuctors involved with this program?
Once again, thank you so much for giving me the informaiton. I'm looking foward to getting your response.
Sincerely,
Byungkeun Son

-byungkeunson

Good job, Byungkeun. Just be a little more careful with your punctuation and spelling/typing. Otherwise a good response that asks two questions and makes one clear request, and your format is excellent.

~ Jason

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08th October 2008 02:33 a.m.

saebomkim

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From: pirater15@naver.com
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About the from you.
Sent: October 09, 4:30 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin,

Thank you for e-mail me about the new online service.

I am interested in the new one. If you don't mind, would you like to answer my questions First of all, Could you tell me anything about the cost of this service? Also, which subjects or parts mainly do we learn?

Would be possible for you fax me the specific information about it?

I’ll be looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours
Saebom Kim

09th October 2008 07:31 a.m.

nahyunsong

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From: nahyun7725@naver.com
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About the iPromote, the online lecture
Sent: October 9, 10:15 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin,

Thank you for contacting me and letting me know about the special online service in your company.

I think it will be very good chance for me to take the special course. However, if you don’t mind, I want to ask some questions. First, could you tell me what time the lecture starts and approximately how long the time of one lecture will be? In addition, do we need any extra equipment to take interactive lectures such as a webcam?

Also, would it be possible for you to send me a file including the information of entrepreneurs?

I hope these things don’t bother you and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Na-Hyun Song

09th October 2008 13:15 p.m.

eunjiseo

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Dear Andrew,

I was happy to get your e-mail.

I really want to take all lectures of iPromote. I hope to know about the cost of the training course. also, Could you tell that lecturer's information?

I look forward to get your e-mail again.

Sincerely,

Eunji Seo

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09th October 2008 13:46 p.m.

jinmooryu

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From: Jinmoo Ryu - realmoo714@hanmail.net
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About your service and requst.
Sent: October 13, 10:05 A.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin.

I appreciate your heartful mail about new online service.

As reading your mail, I become interested in iPromote and find out I have a couple of questions.

First of all, would you tell me how much it costs to use the online service? In addition, what kinds of (interactive) lectures will I take exactly if i use iPromote?

I’d appreciate it if you would give more information about the business entrepreneurs to me.

Thank you for your concern and I'm looking forward to hearing your response soon.

Sincerely,

Jinmoo Ryu

09th October 2008 15:04 p.m.

youjinlee

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From: eeyjjmlove@hanmail.net
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: question and request about iPromote
Sent: October 11, 9:30 P.M.

Dear Mr.Maskin,

Thank you for giving me the information about iPromote. It sounds very interesting and I want to know about the course more detail.

If you don't mind, could you tell me when the course starts? Also, is there any specific requirement I should be prepared before the course?

Would it be possible to ask you to send me some pamplets if available?

I appreciate your concern and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
Youjin Lee

10th October 2008 02:28 a.m.

jiwonkim

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From: kjwgrace@hotmail.com
To: Andrew Maskin- BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About the offers.
Sent: October 12, 7:00 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin,

Thank you for contacting me with the information regarding the new online service.

It sounds very interesting to me and I am thinking about joining the course. If you don't mind, I would like to ask you a couple of questions. First, could you tell me when I am required to register for the course by? Also, can I get a certificate or a diploma if I completed the course?

In addition, would it be possible for you to send me some materials I need to go over before the course?

Thanks once again for contacting me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Jiwon Kim

10th October 2008 11:46 a.m.

sinjikim

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From:Sinji Kim
To:Andrew Maskin-BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About your offers

Dear Mr. Maskin,

Thank you for your e-mail regarding ipromote,

I'm very intereted in training course like iPromote and I think it is good to try it. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you a few things. First, could you please inform me what kind of computer is required for taking internet courses? Also, how much do I pay for it including admission fee if I want to take it with my company?

Would it be to much trouble to ask you to respond to e-mail at your earliest opportunity?

Thanks for contacting me and giving me helpful information. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours.

Sinji Kim

10th October 2008 12:45 p.m.

yunheecho

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From: unirhdwn@hanmail.net
To: Andrew Maskin- BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About your offers
Sent: October 12, 10:00 A.M.

Dear Andrew

I was very grateful to receive your e-mail.

I think I can get some help to start my new business by joining your training course. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask some questions. First, could you tell me how much will it cost to join the training course? Also, would you explain me what kinds of fields are covered to the lectures?

In addition, would it be possible for you to give me a phone call? I'd like to know about this training course in more detail.

Thanks for your consideration and I hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,

Yunhee Cho

12th October 2008 04:56 a.m.

sangeunmoon

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From: xmoonju@naver.com
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: Some inquiries about iPromote
Sent: October 12, 3:50 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin,

I appreciate your e-mail introducing the new service.

The new service you offered is interesting and I'm considering taking part in it. However, as I read your e-mail, I got a couple of questions about it. If you don't mind, could you tell me how much it costs to join it? Also, How many lectures does it consist of?

In addition, I'd like to know what exactly the lecture is about so I'm wondering if you are able to send me more detailed information about the service.

Thanks for giving me useful information and I look forward to receiving your responses.

Sincerely,

Sangeun Moon

12th October 2008 06:52 a.m.

yoonjibae

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From: Yoonji Bae
To: admin@bizsuccess.com
Subject: Questions and a reguest about iPromote
Sent: October 12, 7:27 PM

Dear Andrew,

Thank you for e-mailing and giving me this chance to contact with the iPromote.

I have a couple of questions about iPromote. First of all, could you show me your company's permission? And in addition to that, can I take one free lecture to decide it is suitable for me?

Also, I hope you won't mind my request. I want to know the information about fee. Please present this for learners.

Thank you for reading my e-mail and please send me the answers about my questions as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Yoonji Bae

12th October 2008 10:26 a.m.

jeongahhan

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From: sweet_ing@hanmail.net To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager Subject: Some inquiries about iPromoteSent: October 12, 8:35 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin

Thank you for noticing me such a good program.

It would be a quite useful program to take part in. Before joining it, however, I'd like to ask you a couple of questions. First, how long does the training course take? Also is there any advanced course after taking it?

In addition, if you don't regard it as a rude request, could you mention which entrepreneurs will be join?

I appreciate your offer and I'd look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours,

Jeong-ah Han

12th October 2008 11:34 a.m.

jeongahhan

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From: sweet_ing@hanmail.net
To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject: About your suggestion
Sent: October 12, 8:36 P.M.

Dear Mr. Maskin

Thank you for noticing me such a good program.

It would be a quite useful program to take part in. Before joining it, however, I'd like to ask you a couple of questions. First, how long does the training course take? Also is there any advanced course after taking it?

In addition, if you don't regard it as a rude request, could you mention which entrepreneurs will be join?

I appreciate your offer and I'd look forward to hearing you soon.

Yours,

Jeong-ah Han

12th October 2008 11:35 a.m.

jeongahhan

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Oh, Jason. I did a mistake. I uploaded two things. Please ignore the first one.

12th October 2008 11:37 a.m.

youngahheo

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From:   marrone1107@naver.com
To:   Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager
Subject:   About your offers
Sent:   October 12, 9:10 P.M.

Dear Andrew,

Thank you for giving me the information about the new online service.

It sounds interesting to me, and I seem to join the course. If you don't mind, I want to ask you a couple of questions. First, could you tell me more details about lecturers? Also, how much it costs to join the training course?

In addition, would it be possible for you to send me more specific information on the training course?

Thank you again for your concern. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Youngah Heo

12th October 2008 12:06 p.m.

kangbeumkwon

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From: KangBeom Kwon

To: Andrew Maskin - BizSuccess Online Resources Manager

Subject: Questions and a request about the new service

Dear Mr. Maskin

Thank you for your e-mail regarding the new service.

I think the service is likely to be helpful for my business. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you some questions. Firstly, could you tell me how much it costs to take part in it? In addition to that, are the lecturers certificated?

Also, would it be possible for you to send me a specific schedule of the lectures?

Thanks again for contacting me. And I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

KangBeom Kwon

12th October 2008 12:17 p.m.

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