Opinion Essay : People should be banned from wearing clothes made from animal fur.

Hi, Nahyun :-) Thanks for lending me a paper in the novel class!
This topic is really interesting!
Actually regardless of pros or cons about this topic, I hate fur overcoat because of the smell! Y-each!

Your first sentence was quite direct and that made me a little surprised. lol. However what about changing it like 'People purse two things in their fashion, practicality and beauty'? Your one is liable to give a doubt like 'Do people only think about their fashion?' or so.

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Anyway, your essay was really enjoyable because it was completely opposite from my guess.
See ya :)

Hi nahyun!
Oh, I was surprised with your essay. When I read your topic, you must disagree with using animal fur, I think. But you wrote agreement about that! Wow! And also I think it was very difficult to think reasons why you think we may use animal fur. You take good reasons! Good! I think it is very good essay!

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi, Nahyun!
I'm the one who made the topic 'People should be banned from wearing clothes made from animal fur'. I was so curious how you handled this topic. And your essay is interesting enough to read!!! Isn't it hard to make out three supporting ideas? :)

Actually, I thought that every people would agree with this topic. But after reading your essay, I recognized that there could be various ideas with one topic.

Your second supporting idea is very impressive to me. You accessed to the point with encironmental aspect. I've never thought about side effect of cultivation. It was quite interesting.

Thank you for your creative ideas!

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi.

Goody essay. I think you represent your ideas in very firm way. It's like you are really confident about your ideas. However, I think you didn't think the reason why people ban wearing clothes made from animal fur. You think that’s for animal but actually, the opposite is true. Maybe some of them are really object animal fur for animal but the others’ reason is for themselves. If you wear animal fur, it means that a number of animals should be killed. The more people want clothes made from animal fur, the more animal should be killed. Then the number of predators decreased and that mess up food-chain in nature, ending up destroying human being’s circumstance. It would be much better essay if you considered that way. Thank you.

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi, nahyun~

I enjoyed reading your essay. I think it was a little difficult for you to write about this topic, but you did well!
But, I think that it would have been better if you had added some reasons on this topic in another aspect about killing animals for their fur. I feel sorry for that you just focused on your point of view about wearing clothes made from animal fur.
But, I also agree with your opinion for practical purpose. If we have good a fur coat, we can keep our body warm no matter how cold the outside is.

Also, I think it can't be the solution to protect animal. I think the more effective method is banning hunting animals recklessly for their fur. Anyway, there must be the better way for protection of the animal.

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi Nahyun,
This topic is very interesting, since it is not about global warming, terrorism, nor economic crisis. I have not thought about this issue seriously, because people around me do not usually wear clothes made from animal fur. Maybe, that’s because they are not rich hehe, but after reading your essay, I came to realize that this is an important issue. I like your introduction, since it is precise and doesn’t beat around the bush!! However, I think your first body paragraph is little vague. I got your point though, but that isn’t enough. You are writing an opinion essay, so each paragraph should be convincing and persuasive. The idea presented in the first body paragraph should have been clearer. Also, providing specific examples or data might have helped readers to get more clear picture. Other than that, you did a good job writing this essay. nice work Nahyun!!

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi, nahyun~~

I really enjoyed reading your essay. While I was reading your essay, I felt that you must be a strong woman. When I read your the part,'starving lion', I almost laughed because you are so cute. You are definitely right. The starving lion never consider humans when they eat people. Though, the sentences, whihc are talking about the lion, are a little confusing. Did I understand exactly what you were supposed to say? Anyway it was good to read your essay. Thank you for your effort and sharing your essay with us.

Hi, Nahyun. I am Sangwook Park.
First, I would like to give my gratitude to you for writing a good essay. I totally agree with your opinion about the issue. I think almost all the human beings eat meat. That is also one way of killing animals. Therefore, we should not be banned to use animal fur, if the animals are not eliminated by our need.
Thank you again for writing this good essay. :-)

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hello~!!

Wow… your essay subject is so impressive. And I was surprised becase of you.
When I first read this subject, I imaged that you will agree with this topic. However, after reading I’ve changed my mind. I think your three reasons are reasonable. Most of all, I like your direct narration. I agree that clothes with animal fur are very useful. There are many fur clothes around us. In winter, sometimes I envy them.

Anyway, have a good vacation :)

YES! I'm totally agree with your three opinions!
Personally, I have same opinion in the sense of the practicality.
Also, making advantages from the weaker animals is one of the privileges that the strongs can have. This is the nature, and may be we even have duty to follow the nature, even if we are living in the days of 21st century.
Overall, I'm totally agree with your ideas. And I can't find any rooms for dispute with your essay either.

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hey, Nahyun! It took long time to find your essay!

This essay is really interesting to read. I think this topic is difficult but you showed well your opinion with the strong reasons. As you expected, many people would agree with the statement above but you thought differently! I was a little surprised to see the first part. Yes, it's right that there are the law of the survival in nature and since human being also belongs to nature, human being should also follow the law of the survival.

One thing that needs to make this essay better is specific examples and details. Maybe there certainly are pros and cons on this topic; therefore, there are enough study reaserch and statistis. It have been better if you added this kind of information to your essay. Overall, your essay is really strong and make us think about this issue seriously. I want to give you adtitional points in that you tried to challenge this topic in the other point of view. Thanks for sharing your thought!

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hi, Nahyun
Your essay is really interesting. Actually when I read the title, I thought you may agree that people should be banned from wearing clothes made from animal fur. But you are not. First of all, what you mentioned it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need is actually right. But I think It might be too closely thinking of human position.
Thank you

Hi, nahyun:)

I am inhyun. Maybe we are different class, right? ㅠㅠ
But I really glad to read your essay. It's very interesting! Many people think this topic agaist you, but your ideas are persuasive !!! A dispute between fashion and green activities who protect animals has persisted so long. It's good chance to think about this issue differently.

Thank you.

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong

Hello Nahyun !
I think this might be the second time seeing your essay and whenever see yours I felt your essay contains a lot of imformation of the topic. This topic is what I am interested in also, and really controversial one too. I have seen the daughter of Tomcruise, Suri, wore rabbit fur coat and many people criticized it. I agree with you that animal fur is quite effective and beautiful, but I think it shouldn't kill all of the animals and make them extinct. Anyway, thank you for your opinion and I hope you to enjoy your vacation ~~~ bye ~

People pursue two things, practicality and beauty in their fashion. Especially in winter, they want the clothes with the materials which are warm, stylish and not too thick. A typical example of these materials is animal fur. However, many green activists raise their voice about killing animals to get their fur, so there are numerous opinions which insist that people shouldn’t kill the animals on that purpose. In spite of that public opinion, I don’t agree with that. The reasons why I think like that consist of three aspects; the law of the survival of the fittest; saving of resources; practicality.

First, I think it is natural for the strong to squeeze the weak to fill up their necessities in nature. Look at the life of nature. Although it seems to be heard very coldly, it is true that everything is started by suppressing and being suppressed in nature. Even in the jungle, humans can be the weak to the carnivores like lions and tigers. I think it only exists in the world of human beings for the strong to give consideration to the weak. We can’t find the characteristic that the strong take care of the weak in the world of the beasts. To put it concretely, it won’t happen that a starving lion regards a human being as a weaker one, so he can’t catch and eat it. Therefore it is the natural result that the strong humans get the animal fur for their need.

Second, in the aspect of using resources, it is more effective to wear clothes made from animal fur rather than to wear clothes in many folds, because the clothes made form animal fur are warmer than others. To make fabric, we should cultivate the plant such as cotton plants or raise cocoons. Moreover, to cultivate them and raise them, a lot of resources like water, land and fertilizer are needed. It is wasteful and noneconomic. I can’t understand why green activists waste our resources and time although there is a more effective way. If they think economically, they can realize that they are wrong.

Third, clothes made from animal fur are very practical because it is really effective for keeping warm. These days, the phenomenon of unusual weather makes the temperature decrease much lower in winter. So they can be very useful in chilly winter. Especially, to the inhabitants in cold places like the Polar Regions, those clothes are essential items for conserving their life. They can stay in warm condition with the animal fur, not the fabric.

In many aspects, clothes with animal fur are very useful. However, the fact that people like me agree with wearing clothes made from animal fur should not justify killing animals indiscriminately. Before killing animals and getting fur from them, people should think first how many furs are demanded approximately and if the animals are plentiful or are in danger of extermination. If those actions are preceded, I think the public opinion which insists we should not kill the animals to get their fur can be smaller.

-nahyunsong