Opinion Essay Topic : Declining resources is the most pressing global issue today.

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

Hi, Eunji :D
I read your essay delightly.

I found some mistakes, especially from the point of PUNCTUALITY; You should be more careful when you start to write a new sentence; these are your mistakes : .and(intro) first(at the beginning of the second paragraph) .we(at the bottom of the second paragraph) Second, Recycling(third body),,,,,,
So make sure not to make a mistake about capitalization before you post your writing.

Right, I also agree with your first reason to use renewable engergy. However I have a different idea. I learned that using sun and wind energy has a problem. That is the 'limitation'. For instance, if it is cloudy or rainy, we can't generate the energy from the sun. Also we can't establish turbines or windmill everywhere because there are many areas where the winds are not enough to use. We only establish them near the beach or some plateau.
It was a good idea to quote from the newspaper. Through it, you can give readers confirmation.
Do you really think that there is enough time to prepare for the energy crisis? I disagree. The number of years of possible mining is not long enough and we can't confirm that how long it will take to complete the start of the renewable energe.
However your counclusion was well-consturcted.

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

This is an intersting essey to me.
But even though we know how serious it is and how we can deal with it, we don't care for the nature in the ordinary life. To know how to do is different to do what to do. In my opinion, we should always keep in mind that declining resources is really serious for people and the other living things.
Just my thought.

Thank you for your good essy. Despite different point of view, i think your reasons are reasonable.

Hi, eunji.

I think it’s very interesting topic because its topic is not about how to solve global problem but what is the most pressing global issue. It is not just basic and fundamental question but also very practical one.

I agree with idea that declining resources is not the most pressing issue today but disagree with your bases. You wrote that it’s not the most pressing issue today because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Even though there are many ways developed to use resources more efficiently to save those but I think we cannot say yet we know the way to deal with it. If we can deal with it perfectly, then why are people worried about it? We should fine more effective and sustainable way.

Thank you.

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

Thank you for your concern~!!
I realize that I have mistake about the point of PUNCTUALITY through I read your feedback!
^^ I try to write better essay later.
And I have a time to think about other opinion!!
It's also good time to me.!
Anyway, Thank you for your good thinking!

Hello!

Your essay is really impressed to me.
But I agree that a declining resources is the most pressing global issue today. Resources have a great the power of influence. Especially, Oil is a very important resource that we are using. These day, the weather is so cold. So the amount of Oil is increased. I am so worried about that. The Oil price is higher than ever. Maybe it will be exhausted someday. However, there is no good alternative resources.

Hi~~ eunji

I enjoyed reading your work a lot. As other topics about global issue, I felt that this topic is quite difficult to write about. Though, you did a good job on spreading out your idea about this topic. However I wolud like to mention about repetition. It will be a lot better if you write some sentences in a different way to try to avoid repetition. You repeated Solar energy~~~~~ sloar energy~~~ solar energy~~~. It is just my suggestion. Other than that, your essay is well written. Thank you for sharing your essay with us.

Hello. I am Sangwook from English education department!
I really enjoyed reading what you wrote about it, and thank you for writing this good essay.
However, I feel I should make a kind of critical comment here. It is that you seems to be lost in writing about the topic "Declining resources is the most pressing global issue today." I want to make a comment not on which opinion you have but on the reasons you used to support your opinion.
I think you should have given the readers different kinds of reasons namely a sentence like "The problem regarding world peace is a more important than it."

What do you think of it?

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

Yeah, you are right. declining resources can be the "second-worst" global issue.lol To support ideas, I can see you presented us three distinct ideas, and I think they are reasonable. Ironically, I personally agree about your first supporting idea, but I also disagree about it too. I mean that countries all over the world are now struggling to find a way to overcome the problem of resource problem, and they have come to the conclusion that the renewable energy, or environmentaly friendly energy can be the alternative. However, although they found the break through, they have facing another problem as well. They, countries are now facing the problem of commercialization. So in one side, they have found the break through, but the on the other side, you haven't found the ultimate break through.
Just a my thought! Don't take it too seriously!@

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

Hello Eunjin~
nice to meet you :-)
This topic is very interesting because there are a lot of conflicts over natural resources especially oil. You mentioned your statement enoughly and it really helped me a lot to think about those problems. Introduction, bodies, and conclusions are well organized and you did really good job I think. I hope you to enjoy your vacation ^^
Bye ~~

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

Hi, eunji~

I agree with you. What we have to do at this present for our long living and healthy globe is to recycle things and use renewable energy. I think everyone is already know that kind of duties. There would be no one who doesn't know the fact for our living. But, there is the problem that people hardly try to practice them. I think, the solution depends on the way of people's behavior and attitude. As long as people think that these problems are not their business and act badly what they want, these kinds of problems about declining resources can't be solved easily. For this, I think the most important thing is carrying our thoughts into practice.

Anyway, you did a hard work! Thanks for sharing your ideas.

These days almost all people are affected by declining resources. Oil prices in Korea have hit record levels due to a surge in international oil prices two month ago. But, It is not the most pressing global issue because we already know the way to deal with the declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources.

first, renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. The renewable energy sources could be solar and wind power and biomass. Solar energy is energy given off in the form of light and heat. Solar energy is a wonderful energy source because Solar energy is clean, free and abundant. This use of solar energy could also have the advantage to be free from the variability of daylight. Solar energy has been particularly useful to supply electricity to schools, private houses and other facilities in very remote areas. Wind power is the conversion of wind energy into a useful form, such as electricity, using wind turbines. Wind energy is also plentiful, renewable, widely distributed, clean, and reduces greenhouse gas emissions when it displaces fossil-fuel-derived electricity. Therefore, it is considered by experts to be more environmentally friendly than many other energy sources. Biomass refers to living and recently dead biological material that can be used as fuel or for industrial production. Oceans, salt marshes, and the burning of biomass are a few of the sources of natural methyl bromide. These renewable energy is clean and free. we try to find the way how to use more effective these energy.

Second, Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. Almost all countries already realize the need to reuse scarce resources. so, It is now very fashionable to recycle. For example, POSCO plans to build a children`s can recycling exhibition center in the city of Seongnam at the end of this year. And According to The Korea Herald, Another association notice that the recent recycling rate surge to 74 percent from the initial 13 percent reflects a surprising success in can recycling. Recycling is also effective to the economy. According to The Korea Herald, POSCO and 330 other members of the Korea Metal Can recycling Association will also seek to weed out recycling companies that have been adding impurities into their cans to capitalize on rising scrap steel prices.

Last, The enactment of the world is the way to fight declining resources. It is true that the laws that we comply are usually possible to make environment pollution. Law is the rule to action. Current laws usually made long times ago. so, It is not useful to deal with declining resources. And Modern people try to fit into the new life without giving up the old ways. Without the alternative plan, we can expect global energy needs to double in the next 40 years. People have to adjust to the new condition. And We can't reduce energy consumption, and without any sacrifice. If we enact the law about environment more powerfully, we can adapt the declining resources. For example, To combat the high energy prices, the government has been increasingly considering tax breaks for companies stepping up research and development in energy conservation technologies and urging the public to cut back on consumption.

Above these reasons, We have many ways to deal with declining resources. Renewable energy is a way to deal with the problem declining resources. and Recycling is also pushed as a solution for declining resources. The enactment is also the other way to deal with declining resources. But, We still have many problems to deal with declining resources. We have to find more effective ways on and on. But, It is true that we have enough time to deal with declining resources. and It is not the most pressing global issue today.

-eunjiseo

Hi, Eunji

Good to see you here,

First of all, it is a quite impressive essay to me. The sentences flow well and well supported. I totally agree with the opinion of first paragraph. I think one of the most reasonable reasons of the wordwide economic crisis is based on the dependency of the oil. The more they use, the harder they are depressed. I heard that Switzerland use renewable energy for about 40% of the entire amount. Therefore, they are not affected by the skyrocketing oil prices. I think it is the way we have to persue so that we have the stable economy.