Food Preparatıon is easier today.Has this change improve our lives?
Subject:Nowadays,food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improve the way people life?
The global world faces many changes in human life day by day,especially tecnological changes are the most important one.They affect our daily lives through the several ways.I want to mention about how food world and our kitchens are influenced by these innovations and how these tecnological improvement change our cooking habitants.
Firstly,Some technological improvements make some kitchen activities easier in nowadays.Doubtless,It is useful for amount of time while you are cooking in kitchen because you can cook in less time with some machines like microwave oven and mixer.For instance;If I want to eat someting in a hurry way when I have a little time in the mornings,I can make a toast easier in the micro vawe oven in a one minute.In other example is that I want to make a cake for my friend but if I have not a mixer,I can not mix eggs for a short time effectively Therefore,I can waste my time while mixing by hand
Secondly,People cook more delicious meals in today`s world.In other words,some machines and some easy technigues make it possible.No-frost refrigerator is one example to simplify conservation of foods.At the past time,people could not protect their vegetables,fruits or meats.However,refrigetors conserve fresh foods to people for a long time.Another example is today`s oven which has high techiques for every kinds of food.
Nowadays,all people can cook various receipts even if these are belong to various countries.Namely,Italian woman can cook French meals easily because she searches the name of receipt w’th the google search motor in the web.After she learns receipt,she can be a french cooker.Thus,I mean that Internet is helpful to look for meal receipts what you want to cook.
In conclusion,Cooking and eating are considerable activities for all of us in a daily life.Food preparation has been simplified in the kitchens by the usage of some machines,innovations and the internet.At the last days,every person can prepare food in a short time,effectively.Finally,this situation improves our lives.
Subject:Nowadays,food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improve the way people life?
The global world faces many changes in human life day by day,especially tecnological changes are the most important one.They affect our daily lives through the several ways.I want to mention about how food world and our kitchens are influenced by these innovations and how these tecnological improvement change our cooking habitants.
Firstly,Some technological improvements make some kitchen activities easier in nowadays.Doubtless,It is useful for amount of time while you are cooking in kitchen because you can cook in less time with some machines like microwave oven and mixer.For instance;If I want to eat someting in a hurry way when I have a little time in the mornings,I can make a toast easier in the micro vawe oven in a one minute.In other example is that I want to make a cake for my friend but if I have not a mixer,I can not mix eggs for a short time effectively Therefore,I can waste my time while mixing by hand
Secondly,People cook more delicious meals in today`s world.In other words,some machines and some easy technigues make it possible.No-frost refrigerator is one example to simplify conservation of foods.At the past time,people could not protect their vegetables,fruits or meats.However,refrigetors conserve fresh foods to people for a long time.Another example is today`s oven which has high techiques for every kinds of food.
Nowadays,all people can cook various receipts even if these are belong to various countries.Namely,Italian woman can cook French meals easily because she searches the name of receipt w’th the google search motor in the web.After she learns receipt,she can be a french cooker.Thus,I mean that Internet is helpful to look for meal receipts what you want to cook.
In conclusion,Cooking and eating are considerable activities for all of us in a daily life.Food preparation has been simplified in the kitchens by the usage of some machines,innovations and the internet.At the last days,every person can prepare food in a short time,effectively.Finally,this situation improves our lives.-begul
Hello Begul,
This is just my opinion. Please do not take this in a wrong way. I am trying to help you and I hope these comments will help you with your practice.
Besides grammar and language use, you are still not following my advice regarding space after commas and full stop. You are doing same mistakes again and again. Be careful about your spellings, commas and spaces. Your reasons are very good and examples are supporting your reasons but if you do not concentrate on other things like grammar, language use, spellings, commas, evaluators will deduct your marks no matter how well your reasons are.
Do not write capital letter in the middle of the sentence such as-such, it, if, people, cooking………..Check your spellings like- technological, recipe……
I would like to suggest you to write your essay in your word processor so that it would be easier for you identify your problems. I hope this helps you.
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