Hi, I am new about toefl, but my exam will be 14 days later. Could someone tell me what is my essay level, because I don t have any person aware of toefl near me. It will great help for me. This is the example of my essay

The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or not ?

Although some people complain over the college years, I strongly agree that the college years are the best time in a person's life. After finishing the college, lives of people start to change. For instance, having great friendships, having no life responsibilities such as earning money, caring children are the most important supporters of my argument.

First of all, people generally need to find a job to earn money, after the college finished. It is a new responsibility for people who never experienced a job before. In college years, the only responsibility of a student is to pass the exams successfully. According to my experience, it was very easy, because I had much free time to prepare for the exams. However, I have to work a lot to earn money nowadays. Many of my family members think that after beginning to earn money, a family should come secondly. This statement is probably same for a lot of people living in my country. Then, most of the people will probably have a child. This is harder than to be in a college since the additional responsibility for another person begins to take place.

Secondly, I was proud to be in a college due to having great friendships. For example, I had a friend, John, who is the man I spent three years to live with. We shared the same room at dormitory. Hence, we ate same meals and we went to same places to have fun. All these activities lifted our friendship above. Unfortunately, I cannot contact with my dear friend now, because I do not have enough time to hang out with friends. This achieved to show that my college years were better to contact with others.

In conclusion, the college years were the amazing times for me. I never had an experience like those years. The more the time passes, the more responsibilities dramatically cover the people's life, which makes the rest of life more boring than it was in college times. After living these situations, I defend that the best times of my life ended years ago, while I was graduating from college.

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Some people think that  automobile has improved modern life. Others think it caused serious problems. What is your opinion?

There are numerous inventions in this modern world that brought us advantages and disadvantages. To name one, automobile. Automobile for some people, is ultimately helpful in their daily lives; it has made their errands easier to accomplish. But for some, automobile made their life unhealthy for many different reasons such as it contribute much to air pollution; it makes people physically unfit and lastly it increases the rate of crime and death. In my opinion, I would definitely agree that automobile has contributed enormous bad effects to people's lives for same reasons that I mentioned above.

ya ques 4 is difficult,,
for me ques 1, 2 are the most difficult

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Most of the people all over the world advice their children tell the truth in every case.  My parents told me that when I begin to grow up obviously, too. However, from my point of view, people should sometimes use lying as a choice. Therefore, I completely disagree with the statement for a few reasons.

First of all, some situations can lead a person to tell a lie about what is happening around him/her. Emergency cases are the good illustrations of this situation. For example, I assume that there is a couple and the man is in business trip. If the woman has an accident and is injured while she is alone, relatives of the woman choose to tell lie about the situation to the husband of the woman. If the man gets to know the accident, he will be in panic abroad, and it is not good thing for him. Therefore, lie is so crucial that prevents the man having a depressive mood in this case. Telling this lie would not affect both their relationship and the business man make.

Secondly, telling the truth can cause to collapse of a relationship. Everybody makes mistakes in the world, so nobody is perfect. People usually need to tell lie to hide those mistakes. For instance, a man could be together with another woman instead of his wife after a tiring night covered with alcohol. He will probably be regretful after the situation, but telling the truth would cause to collapse their marriage. Moreover, there would not be positive situation for their reputation among people. Hence, telling the truth is not always good in a relationship.

In conclusion, I disagree that people should always tell the truth. In my opinion, people need to tell some pink lies about the issues, because truth can make the people fail in situations basically.

Decision making is an arduous task especially involves major consideration. It's not only as easy as basic counting from one to ten but also requires profound thinking and introspection to achieve the most favorable judgment. In my own opinion, I agree that people make quick decisions most often ended up wrongly due to the following factors mainly time constraint, unconsulted advice and presently with confused personality.

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Decision making is an arduous task especially involves major consideration. It's not only as easy as basic counting from one to ten but also requires profound thinking and introspection to achieve the most favorable judgment. In my own opinion, I agree that people make quick decisions most often ended up wrongly due to the following factors mainly time constraint, unconsulted advice and presently with confused personality.

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Business should hire employees for their entire lives do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Business establishments needs employees to become fucntional. People need to work in order to  earn a living. One thing that is important is to have a permanent  job, and you will feel secured and more stable if you knew that you will have  a  job. You worry less for if you have a stable job. But i strongly disagee that employers will hire employees  for therir entire lives, because employees can't have any choice anymore if they don't like their jobs and there will be no turning back if they will be hired.

Decision making is really a tough one. You need to think it over for a hundred times, and need to weigh things before coming up to a great decision. At times we think of the good things  and the bad things of the outcome of our decision. It really need  time for us to decide. But on the contrary of it, i disagree that decisions that are quickly answered are always wrong, because there are things that you need to decide instantly. One fine exaample is that when my boyfriend  ask me to marry him, without a glimpse and less than a second  I said "yes" to him, and I never regret my decision even if we are still young that time. In fact it was one of my best decision that I have ever made.

Hi jingdlr! Allow me to give some corrections on your written essay. Reminder: Me, too, is an english learner.

Decision making is really a tough one. You need to think it over for a hundred times and to weigh things before coming up with a great decision. We have to think of the good/bad things it may bring. It really needs time for us to decide. But on the contrary, I disagree that decisions that are quickly answered are always wrong because there are things that you need to decide instantly. One fine example is that, when my boyfriend asked me to marry him, for just less than a second I said "yes" to him. Moreover, I never had any regrets about my decision, even if we were still young that time. In fact, it was one of the great decisions that I have ever made.

corrections: Coma, grammar, spacing, "I instead of i" and some rephrasing.
please note that I may have mistakes too. I will stand corrected.

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